diagnostic writing

My strongest attributes as a writer are the personal connections that I make to my work and how it can connect to other people that are my age.
The biggest concerns that I have about my writing are that I think the way that I write is somewhat hard to understand and that it seems to be pretty short.
The skills that I would like to improve on are my writing skills overall which can range from having a better choice of words to being a more inspirational writer.

Influential Writing in my Life

In my life I have read many stories of how people have came from nothing and then made it big. They worked hard and dedicated their life, sacrificing everything that they have towards achieving their dream. Then after all the time and effort that they put in, they end up getting to their end goal and they were able to do things that seem impossible to most people and it then inspires other people to achieve their dreams even when they don't think they can. There are many examples of this, but the most notable to me is a story of a guy named Jonathan Kim. He went from being a Navy SEAL to a doctor and then he became an astronaut for NASA.

Welcome to my Rhetoric Blog

This is where the work for the class is posted.