Strengths and Weaknesses

- Paper 1 
- The writer did a good job of writing about their subject in an understandable way
- The structure of the paper is very good and stays on topic with each part
- The writer used proper APA format and did everything right

- The paragraphs were a bit long
- There wasn't enough information towards the end
- The writer didn't use enough literary elements to make the paper appealing

Paper 2 
- It was cited correctly
- The information was taken from was easy to understand since it was taken from random people that were interviewed
- The paper was written in a way that every view gets touched 

- There is no title page
- No header and footer
- The quotes are not cited well

Paper 3

- Up to date sources 
- Have 4 different subjects analyzed for each topic - Have enough sources to enhance arguments
- Too long - No quotations - Citing one source for multiple times 


Paper 4  - Up to date sources - Examples from life experiences - Have in-text quotations 
- Too much "I" usages - Conclusion is too short to explain everything - Too long 


Paper 5 - Good citations which points out the usage of each sources - Explained each sources clearly - Many word choices 

- All sources are from internet - Didn't point out which is academic and which is not - Not enough conclusion 


Paper 6- Properly using quotations - Graphically explained models in the subject - Real world examples from sources  
- Not enough sources - Didn't conclude everything - Wrong way to cite sources in text