https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Ad7TzAh4cU
I chose the Bud Light Platinum commercial.
This commercial shows the new drink that they came out with called Bud Light Platinum.
The commercial shows off the product as any other company would when showing off a new flavor, but this is different than just a flavor because the flavor doesn't change and the main difference is that it has a higher alcohol content and it has a smoother feel.
The commercial uses comedic effect to help you remember the product through jokes and a light nature.
The commercial shows the different versions of Bud Light as knights to the king.
The king is like the audience and throughout the series of commercials made like this he gives comments about what tastes better and how they are different.
People have loved the commercial and it has influenced many people to make their own Bud Knight costumes out of empty cases of Bud Light.
The author is Bud Light and they structured it as if it is some medieval time putting a play on words known as "Bud Knight" and they put two characters into the commercial that are known as the knights.
It has a comedic effect that makes it funny to watch.
The audience of this ad is generally people that are of the age to drink and it is for people that like to drink beer.
I think that this ad did a great job at achieving the ultimate goal of increasing Bud Light's overall sales because they created a commercial that is pretty recognizable and it has made people from all over go and buy their new platinum product as well as their common Bud Light product in a much higher volume so people can make their own Bud Knight costumes and so that this one beer is always on their mind instead of some other kind of beer.
Wednesday, February 26, 2020
Monday, February 24, 2020
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Ad7TzAh4cU
I chose the Bud Light Platinum commercial. This commercial shows the new drink that they came out with called the Bud Light Platinum. The purpose of the commercial was to show off the new drink. The commercial shows off the product as any other company would when showing off a new flavor, but this is different than just a flavor because the flavor doesn't change and the main difference is that it has a higher alcohol content and it has a smoother feel. The commercial shows the different versions of Bud Light as knights to the king. The king is like the audience and throughout the series of commercials made like this he gives comments about what tastes better and how they are different. People have loved the commercial and it has influenced many people to make their own Bud Knight costumes out of empty cases of Bud Light. The author is Bud Light and they structured it as if it is some medieval time putting a play on words known as "Bud Knight" and they put two characters into the commercial that are known as the knights. It has a comedic effect that makes it funny to watch. The audience of this ad is generally people that are of the age to drink and it is for people that like to drink beer. This new version of the drink has a higher alcohol content and it has a cooler bottle. The drink is now distributed all over the USA and possibly across the world too.
I chose the Bud Light Platinum commercial. This commercial shows the new drink that they came out with called the Bud Light Platinum. The purpose of the commercial was to show off the new drink. The commercial shows off the product as any other company would when showing off a new flavor, but this is different than just a flavor because the flavor doesn't change and the main difference is that it has a higher alcohol content and it has a smoother feel. The commercial shows the different versions of Bud Light as knights to the king. The king is like the audience and throughout the series of commercials made like this he gives comments about what tastes better and how they are different. People have loved the commercial and it has influenced many people to make their own Bud Knight costumes out of empty cases of Bud Light. The author is Bud Light and they structured it as if it is some medieval time putting a play on words known as "Bud Knight" and they put two characters into the commercial that are known as the knights. It has a comedic effect that makes it funny to watch. The audience of this ad is generally people that are of the age to drink and it is for people that like to drink beer. This new version of the drink has a higher alcohol content and it has a cooler bottle. The drink is now distributed all over the USA and possibly across the world too.
Wednesday, February 5, 2020
Strengths and Weaknesses
- Paper 1
- The writer did a good job of writing about their subject in an understandable way
- The structure of the paper is very good and stays on topic with each part
- The writer used proper APA format and did everything right
- The paragraphs were a bit long
- There wasn't enough information towards the end
- The writer didn't use enough literary elements to make the paper appealing
Paper 2
- It was cited correctly
- The information was taken from was easy to understand since it was taken from random people that were interviewed
- The paper was written in a way that every view gets touched
- There is no title page
- No header and footer
- The quotes are not cited well
Paper 3
- Up to date sources
- Have 4 different subjects analyzed for each topic - Have enough sources to enhance arguments
- Too long - No quotations - Citing one source for multiple times
Paper 4 - Up to date sources - Examples from life experiences - Have in-text quotations
- Too much "I" usages - Conclusion is too short to explain everything - Too long
Paper 5 - Good citations which points out the usage of each sources - Explained each sources clearly - Many word choices
- All sources are from internet - Didn't point out which is academic and which is not - Not enough conclusion
Paper 6- Properly using quotations - Graphically explained models in the subject - Real world examples from sources
- Not enough sources - Didn't conclude everything - Wrong way to cite sources in text
- The writer did a good job of writing about their subject in an understandable way
- The structure of the paper is very good and stays on topic with each part
- The writer used proper APA format and did everything right
- The paragraphs were a bit long
- There wasn't enough information towards the end
- The writer didn't use enough literary elements to make the paper appealing
Paper 2
- It was cited correctly
- The information was taken from was easy to understand since it was taken from random people that were interviewed
- The paper was written in a way that every view gets touched
- There is no title page
- No header and footer
- The quotes are not cited well
Paper 3
- Up to date sources
- Have 4 different subjects analyzed for each topic - Have enough sources to enhance arguments
- Too long - No quotations - Citing one source for multiple times
Paper 4 - Up to date sources - Examples from life experiences - Have in-text quotations
- Too much "I" usages - Conclusion is too short to explain everything - Too long
Paper 5 - Good citations which points out the usage of each sources - Explained each sources clearly - Many word choices
- All sources are from internet - Didn't point out which is academic and which is not - Not enough conclusion
Paper 6- Properly using quotations - Graphically explained models in the subject - Real world examples from sources
- Not enough sources - Didn't conclude everything - Wrong way to cite sources in text
Monday, February 3, 2020
APA post
Aboeder, A. (2020, February 3). the Bucks make good passes instead of a lot of passes. Retrieved February 3, 2020, from https://www.nba.com/bucks/features/bucks-make-good-passes-instead-lot-passes
Evaluating Sources
https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1475158505000524
This site talks about the abstract strategies and research done on how engineering articles are written. Engineering papers are much different than other styles of papers since it is almost always focused on one particular subject as in some kind of idea that is proposed in the paper. Engineering papers are not very personal and they are about the main subject. I am going to use this source to see how papers compare and how to analyze how they are written the way they are.
https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/abs/10.1177/1069072706294518
This article is about how the key roles are studied in engineering papers. I can use this to find what I need to talk about and what is important in my paper. I don't have much experience writing these papers and they are very different from the other papers that will be written in class. The expectations are different for the outcome of the paper.
https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s00766-006-0037-6
This last link is about the structure and the integrity of the paper. The abstract idea for these kind of papers is different because of the design process that the paper relies so heavily on. This talks about the framework of the paper and how much research that it is based off of. I can use this article to understand how they are written and how to create the structure of my paper.
This site talks about the abstract strategies and research done on how engineering articles are written. Engineering papers are much different than other styles of papers since it is almost always focused on one particular subject as in some kind of idea that is proposed in the paper. Engineering papers are not very personal and they are about the main subject. I am going to use this source to see how papers compare and how to analyze how they are written the way they are.
https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/abs/10.1177/1069072706294518
This article is about how the key roles are studied in engineering papers. I can use this to find what I need to talk about and what is important in my paper. I don't have much experience writing these papers and they are very different from the other papers that will be written in class. The expectations are different for the outcome of the paper.
https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s00766-006-0037-6
This last link is about the structure and the integrity of the paper. The abstract idea for these kind of papers is different because of the design process that the paper relies so heavily on. This talks about the framework of the paper and how much research that it is based off of. I can use this article to understand how they are written and how to create the structure of my paper.
Wednesday, January 29, 2020
Major Writing #1 for Monday
This assignment wants me to analyze how other people in the same field of interest (engineering) write reports on their work. Engineering reports are quite different compared to most other field's reports since it is mostly about how a machine/device works or how some kind of chemical is made and what purposes it has. I have had to write an engineering report before in high school and it was very different than any other paper I have ever written. These kind of reports usually have a lot of math involved and have a lot of factual information to be processed in them.
Three questions that I have are:
- Am I supposed to write a report about an engineering project that I am on?
- What are people that haven't decided a major supposed to do?
- What should I look for in the reports? The studies or the actual information.
Three questions that I have are:
- Am I supposed to write a report about an engineering project that I am on?
- What are people that haven't decided a major supposed to do?
- What should I look for in the reports? The studies or the actual information.
Similarities and Differences of MLA and APA
Similarities
- They both have a page number
- They both have a header
- The title is centered
- Both are double spaced
- Author is called by their last name
Differences
- The reference page is different in APA
- APA has a title page
- The page number and the author last name are used in the header in APA
- The full name is used in MLA compared to only the last name in APA
- The title of the paper is on the upper left hand side of each page in APA
- They both have a page number
- They both have a header
- The title is centered
- Both are double spaced
- Author is called by their last name
Differences
- The reference page is different in APA
- APA has a title page
- The page number and the author last name are used in the header in APA
- The full name is used in MLA compared to only the last name in APA
- The title of the paper is on the upper left hand side of each page in APA
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